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Feedback comments from students on Envelope Ideas
'I think the pop format is a good idea but hard to do, theater set is a wicked idea'
'Everything seems to be heading in the right direction. i think the more successful idea would be the curtain fold out, would like to see development of this idea as i think it has most potential'
'think about sturdiness of stock if it is to fold out, test all ideas. will look amazing when finished awesome idea'
'I really like the curtain opening idea the best, the pop up will be too confusing and you won't have enough time to finish all 10. Think about using rich colours like Gold/Cream/Crimson like an original theater set'
'Like how it 'makes itself' adds to the message, simplify to make it more time friendly'
after the last feedback i got i am so pleased they think the idea is great and will work well, i am pushing myself harder on this brief researching and testing more to generate the best piece of work. From the feedback i was given i persuede a few ideas including the pop up which proved to be way too difficult for me.. i decided to stick with the folding curtain idea.
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